Alex, I like how you used yourself as an example in your video. You also made it more applicable to UF students. I think you did a great job with your elevator pitch. I agree that there are many textbooks that are insanely priced and most people know of this problem. In the future, you could try speeding up your elevator pitch and practicing it more with confidence!
Hi Alex, I think you did a really great job on your elevator pitch. I thought you did a great job grabbing the viewers attention and the explaining what you are offering. I think your product might face some difficulties due to there being so much competition in the textbook market but just looking at your pitch I thought it was very good.
Hey man, great job on the elevator pitch. Great voice throughout the video and good eye contact. Overall I felt like you did a good job of conveying your idea and I got a good sense of what your product was and how it would benefit me.
Hi Alex, Your hook and the fact that you used yourself as an example did an excellent job of causing me to want to keep watching your video. You also sounded very confident throughout the video and did a great job of using hand gestures to connect more with the audience! Overall, your video was excellent! I’d recommend just trying to speed up your pitch a bit.
Alex,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used yourself as an example in your video. You also made it more applicable to UF students. I think you did a great job with your elevator pitch. I agree that there are many textbooks that are insanely priced and most people know of this problem. In the future, you could try speeding up your elevator pitch and practicing it more with confidence!
Hi Alex,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really great job on your elevator pitch. I thought you did a great job grabbing the viewers attention and the explaining what you are offering. I think your product might face some difficulties due to there being so much competition in the textbook market but just looking at your pitch I thought it was very good.
Hey man, great job on the elevator pitch. Great voice throughout the video and good eye contact. Overall I felt like you did a good job of conveying your idea and I got a good sense of what your product was and how it would benefit me.
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ReplyDeleteHi Alex,
ReplyDeleteYour hook and the fact that you used yourself as an example did an excellent job of causing me to want to keep watching your video. You also sounded very confident throughout the video and did a great job of using hand gestures to connect more with the audience! Overall, your video was excellent! I’d recommend just trying to speed up your pitch a bit.